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Rising east beholds the rainbow of life
Water flowing light swims all around
Chasing wisps of dreamless dreams away
To stay in nothing, or to wake to nothing

White walls and linoleum halls
Filled with a sense of emotion
Brought on by the clasping of couples
Emotions almost equal to mine

See the smiling faces and forget for a while
But see the reason they smile and loneliness makes a home in the soul
For they kiss with lips and I watch with broken eyes
And whish with out a prayer that instead it was I

So tuck that little bit of hope back into your pocket
Cause you won’t be using it today
The Devil is dancing with the Angels
And all dreams of hope are lost for now

Sorrow fills to the depth of spilling
But I hold back the dam that wants to flow
A feeling of unhappiness wraps its arms around me
And I fall into the sadness of everyone with a smile

Setting west beholds the rainbow of death
The dam flows out as it has done the days of past
Turning down the petals of emptiness
Fall into more welcoming dreamless dreams
And hope that tomorrow will be different
:iconaceness-of-spadeness:

Author's Comments

This poem is about Loneliness...thus the title. It's about haveing hope crushed...by wombats...no not really. But it does have hope crushing in it. I would explane what each line meant...but I'm too lazy to do that...so your just going to have to fin for your selves.

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:iconredvelvetrecluse636:
Wow... It makes me hurt inside. Simple statement for so many thoughts and condolences I wish I could give you.

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The colours red, blue and green are real. The colour yellow is a mystical experience shared by everybody.

-Guildenstern
:iconray-dragon:
*looks at screen with sad eyes* Mrrr no feely lonely. But the poem is very beautiful. I really like the line "The Devil is dancing with the Angels". And you use such beautiful and sad words. *huggers*
Ray Dragon
:iconempty-dreams666:
Very emotional.

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...Lonely, Empty Dreams...
...Will You Share Them With Me?...
:iconlucidflux:
^^ you have captured the emotion exquisitely. Your imagery and mastery of language is AMAZING! I really like the last two stanzas. "A feeling of unhappiness wraps its arms around me / And I fall into the sadness of everyone with a smile." Beautifully melancholic.

I feel that way too a lot...:shrug:

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"...No relation of a dream can convey the dream-sensation, that commingling of absurdity, surprise, and bewilderment in a tremor of struggling revolt, that notion of being captured by the incredible which is the very essence of dreams..."
~Joseph Conrad
:iconaceness-of-spadeness:
O.O....You have taken speech out of me and all I can say is thank you.
:iconlucidflux:
^^ oh, you is welcome. Thanks to you for sharing this with us!
:iconnewglomp:

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"...No relation of a dream can convey the dream-sensation, that commingling of absurdity, surprise, and bewilderment in a tremor of struggling revolt, that notion of being captured by the incredible which is the very essence of dreams..."
~Joseph Conrad

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